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May 20, 2005
Let Them Spit

by Justoju

I lie awake
Drowned in self disgust
Having lost self-trust
Having made self fake
And wanting only to just
Be spat upon
Until that river
Washes clean this kibr
That coats my cavities
And smirks at the Giver
While it strokes the vanities
The pretend sanity
That make it thicker
Yet make my heart thinner
And my soul a sinner
So let them spit
Upon this fallen flesh pit
That needs to be awakened
Needs to be hit
With a cold reality bath
So that maybe later it wont be taken
And washed by the fire’s wrath
In the Truth's aftermath
That I have forsaken.

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Saleem said

very powerful words...

on May 20, 2005 5:08 PM
asif said

Salaam ukhti:

I think you just showed us (especially to myself) a glimpse of our own reflection in the mirror.

JazakAllah khair for the reminder.


on May 21, 2005 11:34 AM
Irfan said

damn nigga damn

on May 21, 2005 5:52 PM
Faisal Akhtar said

I hate spam...I hate spam...I hate spam

on May 21, 2005 7:36 PM
Donald Duck said

Assalamualaikum Wa Rahmatullah,
Br. Irfan's reactions are quite understandable, coz MashAllah the poem is very good.

All Praise is due to Allah Talah.

on May 22, 2005 7:39 AM
Bint Abdul Khaliq said

As Salaamu alaikum

Good poem masha Allah..May Allah grant us all His mercy.Ameen.

Was Salaam

on May 22, 2005 5:51 PM
Ashua said

another great piece of work mashAllah =] ...After reading this i was inspired to pray my magrib salaat. Thank you Justoju =]

on May 24, 2005 8:46 PM
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